Thursday, October 23, 2008

MY Onamateopoea Poem

This week we have been learning about onamateopoea . Onamateopoea is a word that makes a sound like crash, bang and smash. This is my poem with onamateopoea in it .

LUNCH TIME !

The students jump up from their seats and run our the door.
Stomp,Stomp,Stomp!
They get their lunch boxes out and open the lids.
Pop,Pop,Pop!
The students finish lunch and run around the corner.
Thud, Thud, Thud!
They put their lunch boxes away in their bags.
Zip,Zip,Zip!
Then suddenly the boys handball runs away into the grass!
Rumble, Rumble, Rumble!
One girl picks up the handball and runs with it!
Thud,Thud,Thud!
She throws the handball! Piow!
One of the boy catches it.
Plop!
A good game.

1 comment:

Nicola Harvie said...

Hullo! I liked the way your Onomatopoeia poem flowed. Some good ideas!
Keep up the great work!