Thursday, October 30, 2008

MY free verse poem

This week we have been learning a free verse poem. A free verse poem is that you can write anything like : ryhming , onomatopoeia and adjectives.This is what I wrote :

THE BEARS HONEY
Black, brown, beautiful bears,
found a key under a tree!
What's this they thought?
They poked the tree with the key.
''There's a hole," they said.
They put the key in the hole of
the tree.
Clank! They turned the key in the tree.
Eek! There was a door and there was a
floor!
They saw big,big pots of honey!
"We could sell this for lots of money!"
one of the bears said.
"No!" said another!
"Otherwise,what are we going to eat!"said another.
So they decided to keep the honey.
The black, brown bears hid the key under the tree
so they had some honey when they were hungry.

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