This week we have been learning a free verse poem. A free verse poem is that you can write anything like : ryhming , onomatopoeia and adjectives.This is what I wrote :
THE BEARS HONEY
Black, brown, beautiful bears,
found a key under a tree!
What's this they thought?
They poked the tree with the key.
''There's a hole," they said.
They put the key in the hole of
the tree.
Clank! They turned the key in the tree.
Eek! There was a door and there was a
floor!
They saw big,big pots of honey!
"We could sell this for lots of money!"
one of the bears said.
"No!" said another!
"Otherwise,what are we going to eat!"said another.
So they decided to keep the honey.
The black, brown bears hid the key under the tree
so they had some honey when they were hungry.
Thursday, October 30, 2008
Thursday, October 23, 2008
MY Onamateopoea Poem
This week we have been learning about onamateopoea . Onamateopoea is a word that makes a sound like crash, bang and smash. This is my poem with onamateopoea in it .
LUNCH TIME !
The students jump up from their seats and run our the door.
Stomp,Stomp,Stomp!
They get their lunch boxes out and open the lids.
Pop,Pop,Pop!
The students finish lunch and run around the corner.
Thud, Thud, Thud!
They put their lunch boxes away in their bags.
Zip,Zip,Zip!
Then suddenly the boys handball runs away into the grass!
Rumble, Rumble, Rumble!
One girl picks up the handball and runs with it!
Thud,Thud,Thud!
She throws the handball! Piow!
One of the boy catches it.
Plop!
A good game.
LUNCH TIME !
The students jump up from their seats and run our the door.
Stomp,Stomp,Stomp!
They get their lunch boxes out and open the lids.
Pop,Pop,Pop!
The students finish lunch and run around the corner.
Thud, Thud, Thud!
They put their lunch boxes away in their bags.
Zip,Zip,Zip!
Then suddenly the boys handball runs away into the grass!
Rumble, Rumble, Rumble!
One girl picks up the handball and runs with it!
Thud,Thud,Thud!
She throws the handball! Piow!
One of the boy catches it.
Plop!
A good game.
Thursday, October 16, 2008
A network of friends
Thursday, October 9, 2008
In term 4.
This is a new term-term 4.
In this term we are doing constructions and all different kinds of stuff.
This week we have been doing:
Swimming- We had just started to do swimming.The first lesson was great!
Construction- We made a building out of straws. It was great fun!
Maths- We learned our 9 times tables at school.
I HOPE YOU HAVE A GREAT TERM OTHER STUDENTS!
In this term we are doing constructions and all different kinds of stuff.
This week we have been doing:
Swimming- We had just started to do swimming.The first lesson was great!
Construction- We made a building out of straws. It was great fun!
Maths- We learned our 9 times tables at school.
I HOPE YOU HAVE A GREAT TERM OTHER STUDENTS!
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